Monday, 31 October 2016

dessert Narrative

As I was walking through the desert In the distance the  wind was swirling the sand around   then I gazed upon a pyramid . Surrounded by vultures I scared them away using a gun  I was very thirsty but there was no water. My mouth opened with excitement as I walked into the pyramid. As i peered around the corner I saw a coffin with an arm hanging  out of It  I  grabbed a torch and opened the coffin. Scarab beetles started running out they wouldn't touch me because I had fire.  I stumbled into a trap full of poison darts I sprinted in fear but before i know it i'm out of the trap. As I trembled in fear as I peered around the  next corner I saw bright shining gold and diamond.  When I was going to jump into the gold I saw a ton of black scorpions one was behind me and injected me with poisson . I had poison in me I felt  dizzy and tired I grabbed all the gold and  diamonds I could carry . I nearly got out but I collapsed I woke up at a little town in the  desert and I was in a hospital. They said I  was unconscious for two days.


As I stared out the window I saw water. But I had to pay for it I gave him a tiny bit of my gold then I brought the fastest car they had and drove through the desert. But I got lost I looked at the map This location wasn't on the map I drove north but I ended at the same pyramid. I drove south to find the town I found it I asked for direction out of here but they didn't know. They said I had to stay there for ever but i said there must be some way. I drove every direction but there was no way out I thought to myself it must have been the pyramid. So I went back to the pyramid there was a door i've never seen before I went in  it was the way out. As I trembled in fear to go inside the door I thought about it if I went I would see my family  so I leaped in and went home to my family.

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